User:Yunzhe Xu/Zhang Yimou/Tannerfoweraker Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yunzhe Xu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Zhang Yimou


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Zhang Yimou

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The reviewed article adds in useful details and corrects facts that were left out in the original article. The content is neutral it provides factual statements that enhance the article. The references provided are useful to give the reader more information. Overall the editor did a good job organising their information and providing more context.