User:Yuqingli1015/Bispecific monoclonal antibody/Yuqingli1015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yutong Wu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Review from wiki page comparison: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bispecific_monoclonal_antibody&diff=1052900082&oldid=1034395598


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bispecific monoclonal antibody: Bispecific monoclonal antibody

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead

Minor addition to the intro/definition part, made it more clear to the reader

History of bispecific monoclonal antibody

Very informative and concise, but if you are planning to add more I would suggest reference to each original work, and expand on each stories a bit?

 Non IgG like 

Good addition! The description added made the paragraph easier to understand.

 Application of bispecific monoclonal antibody 

A wide range of application examples were added, very informative. Overall no big problem, but again if you would like to add more details, I would suggest adding references that focus on each/some applications you mentioned, so if the reader is interested in one of them they can read more from the paper you are referring to, instead of they get directed to a summary paper on all the applications.

 General Comments: 

I like all of your addition overall! As I mentioned before, if you would like to improve more, adding references and more detailed descriptions to specific examples might be helpful to the readers who are intrigued with the specific points you mentioned in the paragraphs.