User:Yuqingli1015/P1-Derived Artificial Chromosome/Kalearose.fajardo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yuqingli1015


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Yuqingli1015/P1-Derived Artificial Chromosome


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * P1-derived artificial chromosome

Lead

 * The lead could have more about what you added to the article. For example, you could mention that PAC has a lot of applications.

Content

 * The content you added is very relevant to the topic. I like that you included history and applications.
 * It looks pretty up-to-date since your resources span from the 1900s to 2013.
 * You could include more specifically what a LoxP site is.

Tone and Balance

 * Your added content has a neutral tone; you're just presenting facts without presenting an argument, which is good.
 * There aren't any points that are under- or overrepresented.

Sources and References

 * Most statements have good references to back them up. I would recommend adding some citations in the Comparison section, on the second bullet in Application, and on the last sentence of the Application section.
 * The article's content does reflect what the sources say.
 * The sources are very thorough and span a long time gap.
 * Though some sources are older, they are put in the History section.
 * Links work.

Organization

 * The article is pretty clear and concise. There are some grammatical errors that can be easily fixed (like some plural words that should be singular and some verb tenses).
 * I really like the organization of the sections.

Overall Impressions

 * The article is definitely more complete with what you added.
 * You added background as well as uses and construction, which gives good context.
 * The biggest improvement would just be fixing the grammatical mistakes.