User:Yuwei19/Frant Gwo/Gywlala Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yuwei19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yuwei19/Frant_Gwo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yuwei19/Frant_Gwo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)