User:Yuwei19/Frant Gwo/Haojun1997 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yuwei19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yuwei19/Frant_Gwo?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Frant Gwo

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Yuwei! Here's my peer review for you,

Lead

 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? - I am sure you are still focusing on editing and working on it and keep updating the information.

Content

 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? - I can see that you've edited the Wiki page recently but I can't see any different between the last version and the latest version. You should keep working hard and try to working on it.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? - Yes many of the articles you've added into the article are fairly new.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?- No

Tone and Balance

 * Is the content added neutral? - Yes, you did a great job on giving so much detail on Frant Gwo's biography and his career and with a neutral tone.

Organization

 * Is the content added well-written? i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?- Yes it easy to read

Overall impressions

 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e., is the writing more complete?/How can the content be improved- I think you are doing well overall on the Frant Gwo Wiki page. However, try to add his photo or more background with him. And try to correct some grammar mistakes.