User:Yuwei19/Frant Gwo/Sales.Alf Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Yuwei19) GBP1234


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yuwei19/Frant_Gwo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Frant Gwo

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Overall the article draft uses neutral language to give details regarding the Director Frank Gwo and his film career, good use of contrast from other films which points out the excellency of Wandering Earth. I found the article draft to provide relevant information pertaining o the subject of the article and in comparison to the Original article contributes a significant more detail to the subject. They also use academic a relevant and related academic article, the article is well written and has no notable grammatical errors. The only issue to note is that there are a lot of the sections that are missing citations to support certain parts of their article. )