User:Yuweij/Kunming Lake/Ivy Zhao 0704 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yuweij


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yuweij/Kunming_Lake?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kunming Lake

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

The lead has not been changed by the author yet, and since the author added new information about the water source and tourist attraction of Kunming Lake, maybe she should change the lead so that it could provide a comprehensive introduction to the whole article.

Content

I think the content added to the article is very relevant and helpful. The author added information about the water source of the lake, which I think is important information for introducing a lake. And as a lake located in Summer Palace, it is also important to add its tourist information. Therefore, I think the author did a great job in deciding what information to add and added them well.

Tone and Balance

The tone is very neutral, and the author added objective and unbiased information. I didn't show any personal favor so that the reader can have their own points of view and judgements unaffected by the author.

Sources and References

The sources added by the author are pretty reliable and verifiable, and the links work well. And I think that it is helpful to include the source in Chinese to support information on a Chinese lake. However, for the water source part that the author just added, there is no in-text citation and sources to support that part, so the author might need to consider adding sources to this part.

Organization

I think the content is well-written that is easy to read, and there is no spelling error. And they are also well-organized and provide important information about different aspects of the lake.

Images and Media

The author has not added additional images yet.

Overall impressions

I think the overall quality of the content added is high which provided new insights about the lake. The organization and writing quality is good too. I would suggest to expand the Lead part to have a better introduction to the lake and add sources for the Water Source part.