User:Yuxiang Dou/COVID-19 pandemic in mainland China/Jenkint6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Yuxiang Dou


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yuxiang%20Dou/COVID-19_pandemic_in_mainland_China?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall there is great information within this draft, but it needs to have supporting references towards all the information. This content has added great information to the page but some of this information has been added and referenced extensively on Wikipedia's page. I would suggest looking towards area of the article that needs more information. The information as far as I know is accurate regarding research I've seen but it needs to be referenced. The information you provided does add relevant information to the article, it is very well articulate. It seems that there is some shown biased regarding the response of China and could have a more neutral tone within the information. I would also try to focus some of your statements regarding covid-19 to factual statements instead of personal feelings regarding the condition of covid-19.

While the article by itself meets Wikipedia's notability requirement this addition does not as it does not have any referenced information within it. While the information is not cited, there are some strengths to it. The information provides a well laid out storyline of the information rom China regarding coronavirus, but falls short of the supporting evidence of the claims. The article is free of large grammar errors and is very well written. Overall the content can mostly be improved through providing supporting evidence.