User:Ywan1031/Medium theory/Yfan069 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ywan1031


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ywan1031/Medium_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The introduction very succinctly summarizes the new content that the peer is about to show us, is media theory. It covers the two main parts that my colleagues want to talk about, the micro level and the macro level. The lead is succinct, but some information is presented but doesn't seem to be explained in detail. The content added is topical, relatively neutral and not particularly biased towards a particular position, basically speaking from the facts. The resources are relatively comprehensive. One of the articles is from a journal whose reliability remains to be examined. There are no obvious spelling mistakes, and the paragraphs are clear and easy to read. This peer did not added any image.