User:ZBron22/Child poverty/Littlemissfeminist Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ZBron22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZBron22/Child_poverty?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Child poverty

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This article within this declaration argues that the responsibility to address child poverty should not solely (add be placed) on the parents and caregivers of the children but taken up by the states of which the children are inhabiting.

The lead is strong and the writing is succinct. The content is relevant and offers much-needed context to the topic. The tone is neutral, although you assume global buy-in from all stake holders. Do all nation-states hold the UN Convention on the Rights of the Child in high esteem? The references you use are appropriate given the length of your addition. Overall the section is well written and with a few minor changes, the section will be a lot more clear.