User:ZBron22/Child poverty/Sgcoggin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ZBron22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Child poverty

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content added is relevant to the topic, neutral, and provides insight that was previously lacking in the article. The source provided is reliable and the link works correctly. The cited article is from 2011 which makes me wonder if there is another more recent source (I don't know and if there is not then the current one is good). I was slightly confused by the statement "The article within this declaration" and feel it could be further clarified by saying "The article with the UN's declaration" or "The declaration published from the UN Convention on the Rights of the Child" or something similar to connect the first statement and the next. Overall, the added content improved the quality of information in this article.