User:ZP19/Γ-Amanitin/Nicolezakharov Peer Review

General info
ZP19
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZP19/%CE%93-Amanitin?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Γ-Amanitin

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article provides a succinct overview of γ-Amanitin, introducing its chemical structure, properties, and toxicity. The inclusion of identifiers and properties enhances the article's comprehensiveness. However, I think the absence of subsections or headings makes the content appear dense and could appear "less scary" from better organization. I liked the sources that you used. The article appropriately references identifiers and sources, including CAS Number, ChemSpider, and PubChem CID, enhancing the credibility of the information presented. However, the lack of specific citations for statements regarding γ-Amanitin's toxicity and mechanism of action limits the ability to verify the accuracy of these claims. Adding inline citations to reputable sources would strengthen the article's reliability. The article provides fundamental information about γ-Amanitin, outlining its chemical formula, molecular mass, and toxic effects. However, it lacks depth in discussing the compound's mechanism of action and its occurrence in nature. Expanding on these aspects, particularly elucidating how γ-Amanitin inhibits RNA polymerase II and detailing its presence in Amanita mushrooms, would enhance the article's completeness. The article maintains a neutral tone, presenting factual information without bias. However, it could benefit from clarifying technical terms such as "amatoxin" for readers unfamiliar with the subject matter, ensuring accessibility without compromising accuracy. Suggestions for Improvement:


 * 1) Introduce subsections or headings to improve the article's organization and readability.
 * 2) Include inline citations for statements regarding γ-Amanitin's toxicity and mechanism of action to enhance reliability.
 * 3) Expand on the compound's mechanism of action, detailing how it inhibits RNA polymerase II and disrupts mRNA synthesis.
 * 4) Provide information on the natural occurrence of γ-Amanitin in Amanita mushrooms, offering a more comprehensive understanding of its context.
 * 5) Clarify technical terms to ensure broader accessibility while maintaining accuracy and precision.