User:ZS010270/Undecaprenyl Phosphate/QueenStarrUniverse Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Great start. Information is all cited, and the sources are all looking pretty credible. I would give the caveat that this is starting to devolve into scientific jargon. Absolutely not a problem for scientists, but I would recommend adding explanation to all the information you introduce. Most people who read wikipedia don't know what purpose polysaccharides serve in UP and cell walls. For example, in the very first paragraph, I would add a sentence describing what purpose polysaccharides have for crossing the cell membrane. Why is it important? How does it contribute to the cell wall (what even is the cell wall, and what is it made of?) Using scaffolding like this just helps the article flow better. However, I am really impressed with your combined knowledge of the subject, and look forward to seeing where the article will go!