User:ZUnholyz/Evolution of insects/BellaGoose Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zunholyz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Evolution of insects
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead is concise and provides the necessary information for the article. The content is both up to date and relevant to the topic.

The content is neutral.

The content is backed up with a reliable secondary source.

The content is well written.