User:ZWpedia/Fluoride glass/Jgarabit Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ZWpedia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZWpedia/Fluoride_glass?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fluoride glass

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Currently, there is no lead so it's a bit difficult to determine the main additions. However, from comparing the current article with the draft, it looks like several additions are being added and I look forward to seeing those in a more developed stage.

Content

Addition of an application and history section looks interesting but can be improved with a bit more detail from various sources.

Tone and Balance

Tone of the added contents is neutral.

Sources and References

The added sections can be improved with additional sources and details.

Organization

The placement of where the application and history sections will be makes sense. There's some minor grammatical errors but I'm sure it'll be easily ironed out with the author's later revisions.

Overall impressions

I can see the vision and I look forward to seeing it in its more developed form! This is a really interesting topic because I didn't know these were used for mid IR range, which I recall were the more expensive thermal imagers.

Guiding questions:

I am interested in seeing what is the main focus of your added content. In terms of application, are fluoride glass widely used and, if not, why?