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Immunotherapy
Immunotherapy is used to help the immune system to efficiently recoginze and destroy cancer cells. Successes in immunotherapy of many tumor types have raised the interest of immunotherapy of colorectal cancer. Immunotherapy has become an interesting adjuvant therapy for the treatment and eradication of colorectal cancer. Strategies included in immunotherapies for colorectal cancer are monoclonal antibody against cancer antigens, cancer vaccines, and adoptive cell therapy.

Antitumor immunity in colorectal cancer
A few studies in murine and human models  have shown that natural killer cells play an important role in preventing tumors, and controlling tumor growth and dissemination (is dissemination the best word-Alyssa). It has been suggested that there is a direct correlation between increased outcome (outcome of what? -Alyssa) and natural killer cell infiltrate (what is infiltrate?). Natural killer cells could be involved in protection against cancer-initiating cells which play a major role in tumor recurrence.

Functions of unconventional lymphocyte T cells

Functions of tumor infiltrating macrophages

Alyssa's overall comments: remember to make this understandable to a lay audience, so keep language simple and non-jargony. Also, I'm not sure if all your sources are review articles, make sure not to use original research articles.

Diana's comments: Good start on the paragraph. I agree with Alyssa that the language needs to be simplified. Maybe you could fill out the paragraph a bit more by providing some basic definitions for monoclonal antibodies, adoptive cell therapy, what a NK cell is, etc. I know that those can be linked to other wiki pages, but it might be easier for the reader to understand the topic better.