User:ZachRumley/Stomiidae/Dude1107 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kcilley and Amacdo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ZachRumley/Stomiidae?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stomiidae

Evaluate the drafted changes
This subgroup was focused specifically on the lures of dragonfish or Stomiidae. The section on this page is very concise. It is very similar to the information given in the anglerfish page done by the other subgroup. It makes me wonder if the information was initially written over there and not copied over completely. However, I do think that the information is written in a clear and neutral manner.

However, if this is the extent of the changes, I hesitate to think that this is enough. If everything from the previous page was included in this page and organized, then the information would be more than enough. I will go on thinking that they are supposed to be the same.

But I liked the breadth of information updated in the article and the detailed nature of the sources they drew their information from. I believe that it completes the page and without the edits, the page would be missing a lot of essential information. I talked in greater detail about this information in the previous peer review I did of the anglerfish article.

Reply
Thank you for the helpful feedback!-Amacdo