User:Zachary Wang114514/Ḵwiḵwa̱sut'inux̱w Ha̱xwa'mis First Nation/Sapattee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zachary Wang114514


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zachary%20Wang114514/%E1%B8%B4wi%E1%B8%B5wa%CC%B1sut%27inux%CC%B1w_Ha%CC%B1xwa%27mis_First_Nation?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article
 * Ḵwiḵwa̱sut'inux̱w Ha̱xwa'mis First Nation

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information on the draft, is concise, neutral and organized nicely. The sources are reliable and the only comment on them is maybe try to find a book to diversify your bibliography. The content of your article is what the Ḵwiḵwa̱sut'inux̱w Ha̱xwa'mis are currently working on, so maybe add a little more detail to their traditions or culture. You definitely improved the overall content and information presented on the topic compared to the original wiki article. If possible, try to maybe put together some names of chiefs of the Ḵwiḵwa̱sut'inux̱w Ha̱xwa'mis, but I understand that kind of information is hard to dig out. Just to put the cherry on top for your article, try finding some pictures or maybe just a map of where the tribe resides. Another possible subtopic could be if the Ḵwiḵwa̱sut'inux̱w Ha̱xwa'mis was involved in any wars or their interaction with other tribes as well. Overall, you have a great article no grammatical errors, just buff it up all around a little bit more in the final draft. Nice Job!