User:Zafallen/Evolution of Feline Immunodeficiency Virus/Joeadunlap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zfallen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Zafallen/Feline Immunodeficiency Virus Evolution
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section is well written and sets up the rest of the article well. Overall structure and organization is good. The article is quite in depth with information and has plenty of sources. It would definitely be something helpful to read if someone was looking for a place to begin on this topic. Other than the issue with the sentence structure I mentioned on the talk page, there is nothing else I found to be out of place. Maybe add a bit more information on the importance of this topic if you can.