User:Zafallen/Evolution of Feline Immunodeficiency Virus/Sportsphreak73 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Zafallen)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Zafallen/Feline Immunodeficiency Virus Evolution


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is tiny, but I think Star bust phylogenetic pattern is probably supposed to be Starburst, and it might be nice to have a link to what that is. Another small typo was seen in the Genetic section where conversed is used instead of conserved in the last sentence. This is also the only section I had difficulty reading. Compared to the other sections it did not seem to flow as smoothly. I am sure it is only because I get distracted by a thousand different abbreviations in a section. I doubt there is a way to relay the detailed genetic information a better way, but this section is really my only issue with the article. I truly liked everything else about it. The links all worked to your citations and appeared to be appropriate and unbiased. I honestly did not click on all 20+ of them, but the ones I tested were working perfectly.