User:Zafir Alolade/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Titanfall

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article due to our freedom to pick any topic and also my interest in the apex legends game series which is a spin-off of titanfall.

Evaluate the article
The lead section has a good introduction but it does not provide a summary of the whole page or article. Also the information provided in the lead is too short. The content of the article is too small and more information could have been given about the games developer. In addition, there are not enough images used to support the content of the article. Images of the games or gameplay could have been provided. There are no conversations in the talk page that provide any feedback about the article and how it can be improved. Also, in the section about apex legends he does not state that Apex is situated in the same game universe as titanfall.

Overall, the article can be improved by including more information not just in the lead section but overall. Images can also be used to support the information of the article and more research into various sources especially from the game developers can also help.