User:Zafomby/Causes of autism/LaDonna205 Peer Review

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(Zafomby)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:no draft available
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Causes of autism

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Article appears is very thorough. The title and the lead section is brief and concise. Based on this section, it easy to know what to expect in the remainder of the article. The structure of the article appears to be consistent as it list the different causes of autism. One thing stands out to me as odd is the Metabolic disorders section. This section does not appear to be balanced. I think it would be easier on the reader to see a summarization of this section with less links. The organization of the article is clear and easy to read. There are no images nor media and the links to the sources work. My overall impression of this article that is that its convoluted and can be re-organized by summarizing the information in the secondary headings.