User:Zafomby/Social learning theory/Kayoff Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zafomby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zafomby/Social_learning_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social learning theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! I see that your published article seems to already contain a lot of content. The article so far did well of staying neutral with good citation, so if you stick to this going forward you should be good in staying neutral. Of the sources used, many seemed to come from over 8-10 years ago, so you could consider finding newer sources so show any new ideas or concepts while furthering your article. In expanding on your article, it could help to add more to some of the smaller sections such as the "management" and "media violence" sections. With your topic, you could also think about adding about equity gaps within the theory and its practice or even address potential limitations or criticisms of the theory to show a more rounded view of the topic. Although the page does contain a good deal of information, I think it could be nice to add pictures or graph/ tables to the page to make it more appealing.