User:Zafomby/Social learning theory/Mpatel48 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zafomby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zafomby/Social_learning_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social learning theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi! We talked about your article before class, and I understand that you have not had the chance to add to your contribution. I can offer some suggestions for you to expand on your draft. Also, a good source to utilize when you are trying to find information to back up your claims, is the UAB library database. You can search up anything relating to your topic. You can also look at the sources your article has listed and see if you can find sources based off that.

I would first recommend adding to the lead. Here you can include additional statements to further explain the topic. You can also tie in information with whatever you choose to include in the article body. Doing a quick skim, you can honestly expand on the sections that do not have as much information. For example, the evolution and culture would be a good place to include information on the equity gap.

- you can add how the topic applies to college students or other populations

- you can add how this applies to careers, or how it can tie into other topics. for example, this topic can go in hand with behavioral learning or other scopes of diagnosis.

- you can add to the neuroscience section or try to find other courses that could use this theory. i remember learning about this theory in my positive psychology course. you can tie in aspects from this type of psychology as well

i look forward to seeing the contributions you decide to make to this article. it may seem overwhelming, but picking small sections at a time and working on it  slowly will help relief any anxiety. good luck Alex!