User:Zafomby/Social learning theory/Srivera6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

zafomby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zafomby/Social_learning_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social learning theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the first place this article could use some work is in the lead paragraph. It does a good job of explaining concisely what social learning theory is, however, it does not give you a rundown as to what will be coming next in the body of the article. I think you can include some summary on what the article will bring up further!

This article also has a lot of information already. I am wondering if maybe there is a way to incorporate some media throughout, so as to split-up all the big paragraphs!! If not, I have seen that some articles incorporate tables to present info sometimes. For example, when your article discusses modeling and underlying cognitive processes, there is a lot of bullet points. It might be easier to read this info if it were in a different format.

Some of the references used are a little out of date. Maybe you can find more recent sources to back up these claims, or if not, maybe it means the information is out of date, itself. If that is the case, it might be necessary to remove some of the information.