User:Zafomby/Social learning theory/Tolber2K Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zafomby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zafomby/Social_learning_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social learning theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello! I remember you explaining that you had not been able to work on the article just yet and I understand. Some areas that might need work include History and Theoretical Background as it appears very technical and uses a little too much scientific language for a general lay audience. The Criminology section could also potentially be expanded by stating what it was used for in greater detail during its implementation by Burgess and Akers.