User:Zaid Alkh/Pangolin/Janantayudha Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zaid Alkh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pangolin

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There was no draft to be found

Lead

The lead looks as if has strong information about pangolins. Has strong and built information about the characteristics and looks of the animal.

It does contain brief summaries about the article's big summaries like their threats.

Content

The content for each section seems to be built well with large amounts of information. The behavior section seems that additional information can be added like ways they defend themselves from predators. The article looks up to date cause there is a heading with COVID-19 which was recently from last year when covid-19 died down. The article is also neutral on the information it possesses and looks unbiased. A good amount of images too.

Overall Impressions

Overall you can add conservation efforts of protected land for the species cause the latest info on protected wildlife habitats was in 2020 with little detail of how it is protected and only describes where the safe area is.