User:Zainachaudhry/Ormuri/Saraphina9666 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zainachaudhry


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Zainachaudhry/Ormuri
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ormuri

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My peer review:

The lead itself is short but powerful. It gives information on the type of language the Burki people speak and it is endangered. I appreciate the linguistic features it provides in the lead. I feel satisfied after reading it. The structure of the article itself is organized well. The first three sections of the article are short but covers a good amount of informations like its history, dialects and geographic distribution. Following that, the language structure is the most lengthly which is good for people studying languages/linguistics because it covers a lot of the language grammar, phonetic forms and morphology. Im very interesting in this language at this point. I dont see any specific "viewpoints" or perspectives from this article. the information is pretty straight forward and neutral. I am not able to guess the perspective of the original author. Lastly, this article uses reliable sources and external links for anyone who wants to research this endangered language. It uses books about the Burki people and Ormuri. Scholarly articles and The Endangered Language Project. The external links are linguistic research websites and language analysis's. And also JSTOR articles that are heavily detailed in the Ormuri language. The external links to websites do not rely on blogs or self-published authors. A very well written article and its not too long and dry. I would like to see a picture of the language because it does use the Arabic alphabet but it does provide maps of the language and its dialects.