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Propaganda was also used in the media prior to the american revolution when the thirteen colonies were trying to separate from Britain. One example from this time period, is the Boston Massacre. After this event, the colonist began putting forms of propaganda into the newspapers in an attempt to get more people to rebel against the British.

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Propaganda is a form of persuasion that is often used in media to further some sort of agenda, such as a personal, political, or business agenda, by evoking an emotional or obligable response from the audience.

Therefore, propaganda creates conflicts among society's differing classes. Now a days, in a media engulfed society, mass media is the main platform and output for carrying out acts of propaganda and for pushing forward agendas.

Today, there are various amounts of modern media that can be used to supply propaganda to its intended audience such as, radio, television, films posters handouts music smart phones just to name a few.