User:Zander62015/Elliot Fletcher/PlantLover51 Peer Review

This article looks good so far. Neutrality, citations and good sources. Cannot comment on information gap as not familiar.

The introductory, the lead portion seems light. Perhaps include more about being the child of actors? More details about where grew up?

Earl life portion mentions the desire to transition but doesn’t give much detail. Are there any sources available that would give some autobiographical details about the decision to tell parents, etc?

Good Lead.