User:Zanvit/Olca/UNMls Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zanvit


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zanvit/Olca


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Olca

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good start. Needs polishing and more information.

Start embedding your citations. But your sources seem great!

Specific language suggestions:

- "several evidence of Glaciar activity" --> evidence that glaciers were on the volcano in [approximate time]

- "vecinicty" --> vicinity