User:Zapn7/Tumblr/Chito.Mar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zapn7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zapn7/Tumblr?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tumblr

Evaluate the drafted changes
The current state of the sandbox is very well added I saw addition like the tagging feature getting it own subsection and mentions the key features used in the tumblr platform. I do however see other users coming in and asking for sources to be marked on certain statements made in the article. So you should cite the direct statement to the source. I would say to try to make the paragraphs less bulky just to make it easier for readers and editors.