User:Zapytowskil1/Malea Powell/Paslaskip1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zapytowskil1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zapytowskil1/Malea_Powell?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Malea Powell

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?
 * 2) I thought the language of the article was very impressive. I struggled with how to write a Wiki article for very long, but it is the perfect form of summarizing with plagiarizing. The about section was also very informative without going into rants to make up space; It was clean, clear, and concise.
 * 3) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 4) I could be wrong, but I think a PhD is written with a lowercase h and no period, not PH.D. There could be a source you used that proves me wrong though, just wanted to double check!
 * 5) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 6) If the information is available, I think more facts about Malea's up bring or life outside of education would be interesting to read about!
 * 7) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!
 * 8) I am very impressed by how you wrote this article. It is very professional and something I would see on Wikipedia. The language and writing is great!