User:Zarary1987

About me
I am Thai, and I was born in Thailand. I am a college student and studying in The United States. My hobbies are drawing and reading. People who create and see art feel more relaxed because creating and seeing art make them decrease the stress hormone levels. I mainly draw cartoon pictures. I am interested in reading comic books and novels. Harry Potter is one of my favorite books. Also, in my free time, I like to watch movies. I can watch any kind of movies, but I prefer action and comedy. Thank you for visiting my page.

My Wikipedia interests
I have been using Wikipedia since I was in middle school. I used it for research and got information about things I want to know. If I use Wikipedia in the future, I would like to be involved in the contents of Wikipedia and fix or change a little bit in pages to make it better. I am interested in novel authors and actors. I always follow news about authors and actors. I hope I can gather information and develop pages for people who read.

Article Evaluation
At present, I am interested in drawing pictures. I have been drawing pictures since I was young. Drawing pictures is one of my favorite hobbies. I like to draw Anime style. I would like Wikipedia's entry for sketchbook to be better and perfect. For these reasons, I visited the sketchbook article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: citations, error links, and completeness.

Error links
Most of the articles cited in each fact are suitable, but I found error links when I went to the articles' websites, and it said it could not be found. The links that I mentioned were in the Conrad Marten paragraph which were "the itinerary of the expedition", and "the story of his sketchbooks from the Beagle." Another one was "a categorised list of sketchbook images." I think finding a new link or a new source to give details would be better.

Completeness
I observed that Wikipedia described types of sketchbooks on Wikipedia's page, and I know there are many sizes of sketchbooks. I think they can give examples of sketchbook sizes. Therefore, people could notice the difference in the size of the sketchbook and see it clearly.

Summary
From my point of view, this page was not bad, because there is some good information. On the other hand, it has no citations to tell where references are, so that makes this article unreliable because there are no references. The article did not have citations at the bottom of Wikipedia's page. Besides, there are error links and there is some information that did not exist in part of the sketchbook. I hope correcting these will be helpful and useful for this Wikipedia's article.