User:Zatayl/Gender policing/Agraceb09 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cabranc, Lewelch, and Zatayl


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Zatayl/Gender policing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender policing

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * The article gives a good overview of the topic of "gender policing." There are a few terms that I think would be confusing to people not familiar with gender and women's studies, but the use of links throughout the first paragraph help to clarify those.
 * There are a few of the major sections mentioned in the lead, but if you are able to find a way to tie the other topics in (without the lead becoming overwhelming), I think that would be smart.
 * It mentions Judith Butler in the lead but not again in the article. I'm not sure if there would be a place to expand on their work or if that would be necessary for what you are wanting to do.
 * The second paragraph of the lead begins with a sort of recap of the first paragraph, I don't think it detracts from it though, so I think it is fine.

Content


 * I am going to base whether it is "up-to-date" on the talk page. The most recent submission is from February 2021, so that means someone is looking at it and updating. There aren't many things on the talk page, so I am not sure how much people are evaluating and updating information as it comes out or new ideas are formed about gender policing.

Tone and Balance


 * I think the content is neutral. I'm sure someone could argue that it was bias toward people against gender policing, but I feel like it offers an accurate description of the issue.

Sources and References


 * Everything looks like it is cited and there aren't any missing citations. The references also look to be from peer reviewed and published works.

Organization


 * The organization looks good overall. I wonder if it might help to have the section on "Socialization" a little higher because it gives a better understanding of the concept and how gender policing begins and develops throughout people's lives. I think it's fine how it is though.

Images and Media


 * I think this is one of the few Wiki pages that would be weird if there was a picture. I'm not sure if your group has any good ideas for what to add, but I think this page could function without any pictures.