User:Zavala02/¡Mucha Lucha!/Misa900 Peer Review

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Zavala02
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Zavala02/¡Mucha Lucha! - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):¡Mucha Lucha! - Wikipedia

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Content

These are some solid additions you made to this article. I’m surprised at how bare it is considering how unique the show is. The addition of the explanation of the characters signature moves making them transform in to said move is really nice addition, as it’s one of the show’s main gimmicks and what sets it apart from many other wrestling shows so Definity something crucial to the premise.

The only problem I see with this paragraph is that the previous attributor did a mediocre job at wording, making the structure of the sentences feel clunky. For example, they wrote, “The series mainly centers on three friends." To clear up any redundancy, I would get rid of the word mainly, but that’s more of a grammar thing and not directly connected to your additions.

The actual information presented is relevant to the subject. The expansion on The Fleas is also relevant to the character, and I thought it was an interesting tidbit that explains some of the characters mannerisms.

Adding the Tazos to the merchandise section as well as adding the missing song helps with the completion of the article feel complete.

Tone and Balance

The additions are all neutral, as they are only really stating facts, so it would be really hard to make them unneutral.

Sources and References

Many of the additions made don’t require a citation as they are facts but as you discussed in class with the professor adding the episode name and number for the song should be the only thing that really needs a citation.

Organization

Everything added and concise and easy to understand keeping the structure of the original article only making additions to already established sections. Grammer is proper as well.

Overall impressions

Though the additions are minor or subtle they still are very important and add to the overall completion of the article. Especially in the case of the premise, it’s surprising that it wasn’t already included in the premise as some of the episodes concentrate a lot on the characters figuring out their signature moves.