User:Zayanmoses/Political journalism/Carterlockwood1 Peer Review

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Zayanmoses
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This article does a good job of outlining a clear plan for discussing political communication, its history, the role of various media, and associated issues such as lies and media bias. I also think tis good that you added influential writers such as Robert McChesney and Lance Bennett as it adds credibility. The intention to provide a fair view by looking at it through various perspectives also helps a lot.

One thing I would recommend you improve is to slowly transition between sections for a better flow and coherence, also try to critically evaluate these sources or provide a more balanced representation of viewpoints on political communication

I think that you should also be sure to acknowledge the complexity of this topic which could help enhance credibility