User:Zazalong/Huazhu Hotels Group/Ivychen0619 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zazalong


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zazalong/Huazhu_Hotels_Group?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Huazhu Hotels Group

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is concise and includes a clear introductory sentence about the topic, but it might be lack a brief description of the article's major sections, like the history. The overall lead is excellent!

The content added is all relevant to the topic and up-to-date. The editor can be considered adding one section about the hotel's characteristics, purpose, or business philosophy. And also the critical reception, if any.

The current images are well-captioned and help understand the topic. The editor can be considered adding more images about the interior picture of the hotel.

Ensure the tone added is neutral and be aware of the world chosen like 'QI Ji is one of the most successful entrepreneur. This sentence might be a little bit biased in which the world has different opinions toward the standard of the most successful entrepreneur.

And be aware of the formatting under the Huazhu Brands section.

You can check the Wikipedia page of other hotels like Hyatt or Four Seasons to give you an idea of what additional information you can provide.

The editor has already made significant progress with the article, and I am really impressed with it! Great job!