User:Zazalong/Huazhu Hotels Group/JaysenC Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zazalong


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zazalong/Huazhu_Hotels_Group?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Huazhu Hotels Group
 * Huazhu Hotels Group

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall a really good direction. I see that compared to the original version, you have added a lot of new sections and information. Almost all the sources are cited properly and written with a neutral tone. I think the "Huazhu Brand" section can be cleaned up a bit but that is really the main critique I have. The incorporation of the founders section as well as a general intro is a great start to your article. Again, overall it is really an improvement from the original and I think all the new information are necessary as well. Great job!