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 Andrea Begleiter review of ZG's edits to Rainey article 

Most of my edits to Zach's article were to clean up some of the language. A couple sentences could be written in a more Wikipedia-esque style. I also made some suggestions for how Zach can continue to add to the existing Wikipedia article on Rainey. He could discuss more what Rainey's legacy and impact were on the Penn Museum and the field of archaeology in general. Of course, this depends on what citable information is available on Rainey.

 Fjora Arapi review of edits to Rainey article 

Some minor suggestions to make the language style more cohesive with the Wikipedia style, perhaps add some information on What in the World and how it fit into Rainey's vision for the museum, what else he did while he was director to change the museum's image. Other than that, good edits overall!

Early Life
Born in 1907 in Black River Falls, Wisconsin, Rainey grew up....

He began his career in education teaching English in the Philippines, his destination after searching for opportunities after the onset of the Great Depression. ... earning a doctoral degree.

Positions
...prehistory. Rainey, with the approval of the University, constructed a home on the campus for his family. Rainey-Skarland cabin, as it is now known, served both as the Rainey family home and a hub for the University's burgeoning Department of Anthropology. The cabin was the subject of a refurbishing project in 2006, led by Professor Craig Gerlach of the modern anthropology department. ... Museum, serving from 1947 to 1977. His directorship saw Museum scholars explore the globe on more than two hundred trips, including excursions to Thailand, Guatemala, and Greece.

Arctic
... He would return to the Arctic later in his career and write about the differences he saw from his earlier trips there.

Death
On Sunday, October 11th, 1992, Rainey died from cancer at age 85 in Cornwall, England.

Legacy
As director of the Penn Museum for almost thirty years, Rainey was central in many initiatives that influenced the Museum even in its contemporary form. He founded the Museum's publication, Expedition magazine, and was a central force in how museums worldwide understood their own purpose and mission.

Article Evaluation: Penn Museum

 * Everything seems relevant
 * Missing info on specific exhibits
 * Should be noted to update with each new exhibit
 * Tone seems neutral: have to consider the politics of acquisition
 * Second source leads to a 404 error: should be updated
 * Bias may come from the Penn Museum's own website
 * Talk centers around updating naming and museum info, one sourcing question
 * Part of many wikiprojects, but rated mostly low/"start"