User:Zbrooks142/Toledan Tables/Adcmyb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zbrooks142


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zbrooks142/Toledan_Tables?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Toledan Tables

Evaluate the drafted changes
There does not seem to be a lead. The information seems to mostly be there, it just needs to be put together. The content is relevant and up to date. The content does seem to be just thrown in and should probably have some sort of context in the article. It all is very neutral and does not contain bias nor does it try to persuade views. There are many sources that all look credible and very useful to the article. Each source isn't fully used to its potential but has, what I would consider notes, for future use. The references are up-to-date, containing information from 1968-2017. So far, the content is missing transitions which would help it greatly, otherwise, it is well written so far. It does not seem to contain any grammatical errors. My only criticism is it could use some structure. I believe it would add quality to the article. The information does a good job of giving a better history of the Toledan Tables. Adcmyb (talk) 15:03, 25 March 2022 (UTC)