User:Zc012/Communication/Yingzhuo Yang Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Zc012


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zc012/Communication?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

In the leading questions, the author introduces the meaning of the theory concisely and also contains some information of the article. But it's a little too neat. The content is related to the topic. There is no overt bias towards a particular position. The author also collects and cites some examples to help readers better understand "communication".