User:Zcc002/Bordetella/Jawabii01 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zcc002


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zcc002/Bordetella/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bordetella

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

gram-negative), B. bronchiseptica is gram-negative  - great edit, I agree it should be stated with the species at the beginning instead of in a separate sentence.

 coccoid coccobacillus- I don't ''think this word needs to be changed as it describes size and shape while coccobacillus is a type of bacteria. I could be wrong.''

This species is also typically associated with kennel cough (Canine Respiratory Infectious Disease (CIRD)) in dogs.[1] - Which source did this come from?

You could include when this bacteria was first discovered, what preventative measures can be taken to avoid being infected by it, who has a higher risk of being infected based on age, gender, race, etc.