User:Zcintas/Rapid ʻŌhiʻa Death/Dlulozun Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zcintas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zcintas/Rapid_%CA%BB%C5%8Chi%CA%BBa_Death?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rapid ʻŌhiʻa Death

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I believe the Policies and Plans section was pretty great. I think it contained sufficient information about the plan being implemented to solve the issue. There was also proper citations to the sources. I believe the additional changes to the page have made the page seem more whole because now the page contains information about how the issue is being handled presently. my recommendation may be to find more current information on how the new policy has impacted the issue.