User:Zclayt/Abnormal psychology/Lmn23 Peer Review

General info
Zclayt
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Zclayt/Abnormal psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Abnormal psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article provides information on abnormal psychology. There is solid information regarding the background, certain mental disorders, and certain therapies that are used today. I think the user has done a great job at updating the lead to make it more concise and properly set up the layout of the article! The lead starts with a sentence that defines what abnormal psychology is, which sets up the topic of the article. I think the content added is relevant. I especially like how the user included criticisms of abnormal psychology. I do not see it in the published article, but I think it will be a great addition! I like that the article discusses the way mental health has been viewed throughout history. The topic of mental health, historically, has been underrepresented, so I think this article as a whole deals with an equity gap. The overall tone of the article and the edits in the sandbox are neutral. All of the statements are facts, backed by sources, that do not appear to be persuasive or leaning towards an opinion in any way. All of the sources are reliable with links that work. There does not appear to be many different references, and with the plethora of information, I think adding a few more could improve this article even more! The sections of this article are clear, concise, and in a good order. I might suggest moving the "Classification" section closer to the mental disorder examples, maybe above or right under. The article does not include any images, but one could potentially be added to the history section of an important figure that helped develop abnormal psychology. Overall, I think the content added has improved the article. It has made the lead and certain parts of the article body more concise. I look forward to reading the final article!