User:Zengxiaoxian/Leilah Babirye/Cboka Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zengxiaoxian


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft:Leilah Babirye


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article looks amazing so far! You've made it very clear, detailed, and clean.

It looks like some things could use minor touch ups, such as changing "Sculpting's" to sculptures potentially.

You could also maybe write short descriptions of the most prominent artworks and describe the significance of the medium, style, message, etc.

But the biographical aspects look fantastic and don't seem to need much editing.