User:Zengxiaoxian/Leilah Babirye/Miso Raven Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zengxiaoxian


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zengxiaoxian/Leilah_Babirye?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

The lead is concise and effective. It gives the reader a good idea of what the following sections will include.

Content

Content appears to be relevant and up to date. Content addresses an equality gap.

Sources and References

Everything seems to be properly cited with reliable references.

Organization

I might suggest merging the early life and education sections because they are both quite small at this stage of the article. Might want to re-read it for grammar issues. I noticed one sentence that seemed a bit off under the "Queen in Love" section.

Impressions

Seems like you have a good article going. With a few final touches it should be solid.