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Drosophila melanogaster article

I thought this article contained a lot of elaborated useful information, everything was well written and explained. You do not have to know about flies in order to understand what they were saying, educating the general public. I think they should consider moving the part Model organism in genetics last in order for the information to have a better flow, it seems like that part interrupts the flow of the context. The tone is very much neutral. Looking over the sources, many are scholarly sources in which the links work. Wikipedia does not seem to go into depth of the different genome of the flies we studied in class. Within the talk page, there are a lot of comments in which people agree with what is written but also some grammar and picture edits. This page is within the scope of the Wiki Project Insects.