User:Zerocarey/Language revitalization/Simpson Hannah Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Zerocarey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that the addition to the page is fitting and adds additional information that was not already on the page. I think that the source is strong. One thing I did notice was that you cited a paragraph header instead of the name of the chapter.