User:Zerocarey/Language revitalization/Tedrickja Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Zerocarey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zerocarey/Language_revitalization?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language revitalization

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, a minor edit, but one much needed. You provided good detail for the reasons by which language revitalization may occur, the hows and whys. I believe that this adds some differing perspective to the original article, giving potential readers more insight into the phenomena.